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Writing a short story may not take the same time and energy as writing a novel, but the shorter form provides its own challenges – notably crafting a meaningful read in a short span of time and pages. These four tips can help you focus on how to write a short story.

Short stories are one of the most popular literary forms, for authors and readers alike. Although much more time and effort goes into creating a book or a novel, short stories have their artistic value, and their elegant simplicity makes them appear easy to write – which is not exactly the case.

I can’t help but recall the legendary anecdote involving the great Ernest Hemingway. Hemingway bet a few of his fellow authors that he would be able to create a short story containing only six words. They deemed it an impossible feat, but after all the money was placed in the pot, Hemingway wrote down something on a napkin, and passed it on for other writers to read. The napkin read “For sale: baby shoes. Never worn”.

There are examples like this one that can testify to the simple power of a short story, but for the time being, let’s focus on how to write a short story and what you can do to make your writing come to life. Here are four essential tips designed to help you do exactly that.

1. Start with a single detail

There are rare occasions when a complete story will reveal itself to you, right away, beginning to end. More often than not, you will come up with smaller pieces of the puzzle, which can be anything from a specific event around which the entire story is written, a main character’s name or physical traits, a location, or maybe just a particular phrase or word you want to use at some point in the story.

One way to come up with ideas for a story is to schedule a brainstorming session, though inspiration is a fickle thing known to strike at any moment, so make sure you are always prepared to write down the ideas that pop inside your head. Of course, you can also turn to real life for inspiration, especially when it comes to developing your characters.

2. Set up the story immediately

Because of their compact format, short stories do not allow for lengthy expositions, dozens of characters, or meandering subplots. This means you should focus on providing the reader with all the information he or she needs right away and set up the story from the first sentence. Make sure your reader is aware of the event that is taking place, as well as time, location, and all of the characters which carry the story.

Simply put, every single sentence should propel the short story forward, or develop its characters. Speaking of characters, keep in mind that this particular literary form allows only for a small number of fully fleshed-out characters who contribute to the overall narrative. This same approach should translate to the events described in short stories as occurring over a period of days, hours, or even minutes, and taking place in one or two settings.

3. Create believable characters

The key to making your story appear genuine and believable is to make your characters human, with all their virtues and flaws. If you are not sure how to do this, pick a character, and write down a list of all their traits and attributes, like their name or nickname, favorite food, place they were born in, or physical impairments, just as if they were real.

Again, when you are shooting for realism, you must avoid making your characters perfect. In fact, why not have some fun and create a character that is deeply flawed, or even has a villainous side? If you think readers will have a tough time identifying with a character who makes questionable moral choices from time to time, consider Batman, who is nearly psychotic in his pursuit of criminals, or the serial killer Dexter from the TV show of the same name.

4. Make it short, but meaningful

Kurt Vonnegut had a great advice for writers: “Use the time of a total stranger in such a way that he or she will not feel the time was wasted.” A short story doesn’t give you much space for elaborations of the psychological triggers behind the characters’ actions, but you should still achieve sense of completion. The reader should understand where the culmination of the plot comes from. He needs to realize what the protagonist wants and why he made the morally significant choices that mark your short story. While this doesn’t mean you should aim to please everybody’s taste with your short story, the reader should walk away after reading your work and feel as if it was worth their time and effort.

 
Becoming a great writer
Whether you’re writing short stories, novels, or screenplays, these three tips can help you improve your writing.

1. Let somebody else read your work

While you are the author and you stand behind your work 100%, it is always a good idea to involve a fresh pair of eyes and some honest feedback. This will not only enable you to assess your writing from a different perspective, but constructive criticism will help you avoid the trap of falling in love with your own work and treating your ideas as too precious.

This fresh pair of eyes can be a fellow author you admire or a friend you can trust to provide you with objective feedback. Don’t just focus on the praise they give you. Consider the stuff they didn’t like as well, without taking it too personally (that’s sometimes difficult). In the end, it is still your story, which means it is you who gets to make the final decision.

2. Keep at it

Be prepared to encounter some road blocks on your way to becoming an author. You will experience writer’s block, dry spells, go through dozens of different edits, eliminate characters, introduce new ones, change the ending, consider yourself the worst writer in the world, and decide you stand a better chance making a living off just about anything else.

These feelings are perfectly normal and just because you don’t get it right on your first draft, that doesn’t mean you are a bad writer. Remember, writing is not a race. It’s not about who gets there first. It’s about being able to make the most out of your creative capacities and craft something you can be proud of and that moves your reader.

3. Read masterful short stories

This tip may not be an instant fix to your problem, but it’s the best long-term advice anyone can give you. To gain a better understanding of how short stories work, immerse yourself in the works of authors who preferred the same medium, such Phillip K. Dick, Charles Bukowski, Ernest Hemingway, Anton Chekhov, and Ray Bradbury.

Notice that each of these writers approached the short story format from a different angle, which means reading their work will help you expand your skills and allow you to write in a multitude of different styles. Pay attention to some of their solutions which help move the plot along, or the manner in which they develop their characters and establish their motivation.

Now get to it. We can’t wait to read your work!

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17 thoughts on “Writing intriguing short stories

  1. Mauritius says:

    It is even more difficult to write short stories as you need to catch the recipient from the first line. To my mind short stories with an unpredictable denouement will never be boring. My heart is belong to Poe’s short stories characters: they are always complicated and interesting to analyze. What all authors should keep in mind is focalization. Moreover, writers with literal taste pay attention to such kind of phenomenon as simulacrum. In our modern world, unfortunately, less and less writers care about intellectual property rights. Copy and paste, borrowing, stealing… these actions will prevent even a talented copycat from ”Becoming a great writer”. I can not understand why people are so lazy to think sometimes. Why not to become a unique person in this literal world? My dream is to write a masterpiece, but unintentional plagiarism happens! Thanks to technological minds, plagiarism detection engines like https://unplag.com/ were created. Let’s brush our world! Create and Write! Thank you Stephanie for this article, thank you!

    1. I was told by my Creative Writing professor that “good writers borrow, great writers steal.” I wholeheartedly disagree.

      1. Michael van der Riet says:

        Any story is situation + characters. You may like the situation that another writer used, or fall in love with one of their characters.

  2. Very true keep it short, realistic and thus worth reader’s time.

  3. What an insightful piece. There’s nothing as good as keeping your stories simple, short and realistic. Thanks Bb

  4. Jake Devlin says:

    An author friend of mine wrote what he titled “An Apocalyptic Micro-Short Story” on Twitter (140 characters or less):

    “As the two lovers entwined their naked bodies on the mountainside, the world came to an abrupt”

    I always get a chuckle when I’m reminded of it, even with the words “short story” in some blog somewhere.

    This blog was pretty useful. Thanks.

  5. Kelsey says:

    Take it from Hemingway and start small! One simple idea can be expanded upon to create something worth reading. Aren’t you curious about the baby shoes and why they were never worn?

  6. I love six-word stories. They are usually witty!

  7. Robin says:

    I notice you didn’t mention O Henry who was maybe the best of the bunch when it came to short stories that touched and entertained.

  8. smith says:

    Thank you for these valuable tips.

  9. Kim Magennis says:

    My short stories range from 100 to 500 words. I find them useful in teaching me what to leave out of longer stories. Readers like to be engaged, they like to add their own interpretations and details, which they can’t if it is all done for them.

  10. RICHARD CANARY says:

    I’m now reading “Conan’s Brethren” by Robert E. Howard. This is a collection of short stories about characters similar in many ways to the Conan of the movie character. It is fascinating writing, with a mystical, rythmical gait to it that makes the book hard to put down. Google Howard for a glimpse of his short, but very productive and prolific writring career.

    I hope some of you will read some of these stories and see some of the mesmerizing writing skills Howard uses to entrap the reader.

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