Whether you are working on draft material or devising a story in your mind, one element of great writing is cranking up the extraordinary to pack in information, meaning, and creativity.

What’s the key to great writing? Making all of it great. Take out slow, confusing or tangential parts. Even better, don’t even pen them in the first place. Learn to distinguish. All your words should gleam and hang together like the many parts that make a classic car or a Ferrari. All writers are told to cut, or “murder your darlings” as the famous quote goes. Editing is the key to great writing, many say. The key to editing is to distill and heighten your writing to pack in information, meaning, and creativity.

You can edit on paper, first getting it all out and then sifting through for the nuggets to keep. But editing can also be done in your head, using logic, common sense, and a huge dose of creativity. Whether you are working on draft material or devising a story in your head, keep these thoughts in mind.

1. Think of a biography

A biography (or autobiography) is a life story. Clearly, you can’t pack in every detail of a lived life in a volume that fits on a normal bookshelf. Authors have to be highly selective in what they include, distilling constantly.

What to include? Clearly, the most interesting, exciting, and meaningful parts of the much longer life story. This is the most exaggerated example of distillation — like a keg of non-alcoholic beer versus a shot of vodka you can set on fire.

Second, biographies are written only about the most unusual of lives – heroes, survivors, the super rich, super talented, or otherwise larger-than-life.

Moreover, a well-written biography is not just a list of facts, it’s a true story. All the ideas form a single, tightly woven rope pulling the reader through the book from the opening words to the last page.

2. Think of a memoir

Now we are talking about one slice of a life, a further distillation. A person can write more than one memoir, like the wonderful Stephen Fry, because a memoir is about one event or phase in a life. Now, the content is even more distilled and purposefully interwoven into a theme. While a biography tells you “everything” about a person and the reasons they are who they are, a memoir has an even more specific takeaway message.

A memoir is meant to instruct in some way – by good or bad example. A life well-lived or a life best steered clear of. A famous opera singer or a drug addict. The point is, the whole story revolves around a single idea: a rise to fame; redemption; overcoming impossible odds; or inventing a game changer, like the light bulb, the Polio vaccine, or Facebook.

3. Think of fiction

In fiction, the sky is the limit because everything can be made up. So, make up good stuff and pack it in. Consciously skip the bland stuff. This should be obvious, but sometimes it takes practice.

Don’t talk about meals, or showers, or walks to the mailbox unless they are critical to the plot. If you include a dinner scene, it should have a justifiably deeper meaning: you poisoned your hero or fed him magic beans.

Why have a common scenario in the background when you could big it up? Instead of a fallback dinner scene for an “important talk,” why not put your characters on a roller coaster ride, or bungee jumping, or talking at the exact moment your heroine finds out there really is a monster under the bed? Skip past the everyday things and your reader will fill in the obvious missing bits with no problem — and thank you for it.

4. Heighten

Once you are sure everything has a place in your story, you can focus on heightening. Everyone knows how the fish story grows over time. A dad and son catch a foot-long fish. As the story is repeated, and the tendency to exaggerate for effect and pride grows, the size of the fish lengthens and lengthens. This is the art of showboating and great storytelling. Who wants to hear about a foot-long fish compared to a four-footer that fought so hard it almost capsized the boat?

Look for fish in your writing. Heightening means going that extra stretch and adding the extraordinary. The love in Twilight is not “normal” or “everyday” love: it’s once-in-a-century love. It’s a one-in-a-billion love. And it’s not between two “normal people.” It’s between a human outsider and a vampire who’s been waiting his whole life just for her.

Can you crank up the extraordinary in your story?

At the level of individual paragraphs and sentences, think about how to ramp up your verbal imagery. Increase the numbers and types of images formed in the reader’s brain. It’s the mental imagery that helps those words jump off the page and into reader’s minds in a memorable way.

5. Synergize

The biggest and best impact in terms of distilling and heightening your content is when the sum is more than the parts.

You want all the parts of your story to not only hang together, like pearls on a necklace, but to mean more to the reader because they are together and in that particular order. Would you rather have 20 pearls in your hand, or ordered by size, the biggest in the middle, on a necklace? Your book should be a fine pearl necklace – or that Ferrari. Really, whatever you chose.

Sometimes you can look at your story and crank up the juxtapositions or “opposites attract” nature of things. For example, if you have two characters working together, make one the foil of the other – good cop, bad cop. Can you ramp up the differences to highlight the nature of both?

 

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Dawn Field

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Dr. Dawn Field is a book lover interested in what makes great writing. After a 20 year career as a research scientist, her first book, Biocode, was published by Oxford University Press. Now a columnist of The Double Helix, Dr. Field is exploring new writing venues and writing a second book. Based in Virginia, Dr. Field is looking to collaborate with a range of fiction writers as a writing coach, editor, and consultant on the publishing process: fiedawn@gmail.com.

2 thoughts on “Five Ways to Distill and Heighten Your Writing

  1. I’ve written and published six books. Three of my own, two for Chuck Norris, and one for Academy Award actress Terry Moore and I feel so far from where I should be. I still write but I never finish – I have thousands of pages I keep on 5 different hard drives and I just go to them and rewrite and rewrite but I do nothing with them. I’ve come to believe I just like to write but I don’t know how… sort of like “I hear you knocking but you can’t come in”.
    Coming across your info has encouraged me to try a littler harder and to keep writing.
    Thanks for this pep talk.

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